We like your newsletter as it is clean and the contents concise. You may like to elaborate more on the reactions of the students when they saw "Sir Stamford Raffles". Your article lacked the human touch when it came to this.
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We like your newsletter as it is clean and the contents concise.
You may like to elaborate more on the reactions of the students when they saw "Sir Stamford Raffles". Your article lacked the human touch when it came to this.
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